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Joined: Oct 2009 Gender: Male  Posts: 987 Location: I love negative karma. Karma: -2 |  | William-district 1 « Thread Started on Mar 7, 2012, 8:01pm » | |
Name: William Jethrow Wilson Age: 16 Gender: Male District/Area: District 1 Appearance: William is a stock young man. He is about 5"5. He has broad shoulders and is decently built. He has a good amount of muscle on him. His hair is a sort of dirty blonde. When the sun hits it right it looks white but in the dark it turns into a dark/dirty blonde.
He had the clearest blue eyes that look like the ocean was flowing through them. He was was not that heavy in weight. He weighed only 140. Most of him was muscle though. He has a tattoo on his right shoulder that has D1 in a circle. He is a very non hairy person. Personality: William is a little bipolar at times. He has a nice side most of the time. He will treat you with respect if you treat him with it. When he is nice he will help out anyone. He also treats everyone with respect.
He gets angry a lot of the time also. He will start yelling at the simplest thing that upsets him. He shows how much he cares about his father and mother. He has a killer personality. If he gets into a fight he always tries to finish it somehow.
He is a very independent person. He tries to never go to anyone for help unless it is a last resort. He hides his true feelings for the people he cares about. He is also shy when it comes to females. History: William was born to a normal family in district 1. He had everything he could want. He had what most people would call a normal family. He had a mother and father. No siblings though. He grew up with a lot of friends and not really feeling lonely at all.
During his child hood he got into fights. He was always punished which is why he was angry person some of the times. He was given a gift from his father at the age of 12. It was a small knife. He always carried it on him when he left for somewhere. He had made a lot of enemies growing up.
At the age of 15 he ended up meeting a very beautiful girl named cherry. He tried to impress her by showing off his skills at knife throwing. He had learned his skills by practicing at his house on his spare time. He had started learning how to do it when he first got the knife. But when he met her he changed from learning to kill to learn and impress the ladies. Codeword: Odair Comments/Other:
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![[homepage] [homepage]](http://images.proboards.com/buttons/www_sm.gif) Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 2,309 Karma: 104 |  | Re: William-district 1 « Reply #1 on Mar 10, 2012, 2:32am » | |
You've improved lots. (: A tip for the future: Work on making longer sentences and combining them with modifiers and everything. For now, all your sentences have [subject][predicate]. Give it a little variety. (:
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